I read a story about one musician who didn't play a piano at all for 4min and 33sec. Also, he says that is a piece of art. I disagree with his perspective thinking that is an art for several reasons.
First, art should give some kinds of feelings to people. The audience must be came to the concert looking foward to listening the pianist's piano playing. However , the pianist absolutely did nothing at all. In addition, He didn't explained or helped the people to understand his behavior better. It means he failed to connect with audience cause the they were confused when they saw his playing. . Also, he disappointed so many people who paid money to enjoy music.
Second, his playing has no elements which are essential to consist music. According to naver dictionary, music is a type of art which harmonizes and combines rhythm, melody, sounds through musical instruments or voice to express feelings. But the pianist's playing doesn't have any rhythms or melodies and even sounds. It can't be called as a part of music and also cannot be an art.
To sum up, I disagree with the idea to consider '4 min and 33sec' to be a type of art becasue, first it failed to communicate with the audience and second, it has no musical elements.
Miss.Bolsal~
답글삭제Your essay was pretty good!!
I agree with your opinion. In addition to your ideas, it doesn't have certain kinds of skills!
It means anyone can do that performance.
Anyway, I love this part of your essay ↓
'He didn't explained or helped the people to understand his behavior better. It means he failed to connect with audience cause the they were confused'
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I'm sorry not to come stay with you.
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I read your essay.
Your essay is simple and clear.
I can understand easily.
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Thank you Ppang Ssum ! You always give me smile~ haha After 30 min, it is lunch time. I am so happy! Aren't you?
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답글삭제Dear Miss Bolsal and Ppang Ssum,
답글삭제I like your ideas regarding your disagreement with the statement. When it comes to Sumi's opinion, we are talking about the "originality" of the art works. Do you agree with me?
After school excursion, you will post your writng on "Building Green"?
Let's make a good memory during the field trip.